Yesterday we went to CODENI and I was supposed to be teaching one of the kids how to write poems. However, the teacher told him that all he needed to do was copy poems from a textbook. An approach that I thought was totally wrong. So, instead, I convinced him to write a poem of his own. His name was Sergio and this was the poem he wrote:
MI VIDA SIN TI
Eres como una rosa roja
Que en las noches brilla
Como un diamante
Y tienes tus labios
Como perlas
Eres mi vida
Eres mi razon de vivir
Sin ti la vida no es nada
Sin ti no se vivir
So, needless to say, I felt really proud of him, and was very glad that he developed the necessary confidence to write a poem of his own, and be willing to expose his own thoughts.
-Maite RyV
Friday, March 20, 2009
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With this poem i realize we are not that different. I was present when he was writing his poem and i have to say he just wrote this poem for love. We have the same desires and many times thoughts happiness. WE ARE NOT THAT DIFFERENT...
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